Finally, it’s getting down to it! Do him, right in front of your Mentor. Show him you want it more, and dominate that chocolate skinned beauty until rouses, stiffens, and squeals with delight. You both dreamed of this moment, and now it is yours to claim the sweet, juicy fruits of your victory.
Sorry their wasn’t more action between the two. Feel sorry for the brother, who not only lost but was humiliated and abandoned by his brother. Don’t know if they will reconcile or become foes. Nice introduction of what I imagine is a latent time distortion power the candidates were selected as possibly possessing. The guy who gently takes the defeated brother in hand could easily become a soulmate and lover.
neverland 
Finally, it’s getting down to it! Do him, right in front of your Mentor. Show him you want it more, and dominate that chocolate skinned beauty until rouses, stiffens, and squeals with delight. You both dreamed of this moment, and now it is yours to claim the sweet, juicy fruits of your victory.
Sorry their wasn’t more action between the two. Feel sorry for the brother, who not only lost but was humiliated and abandoned by his brother. Don’t know if they will reconcile or become foes. Nice introduction of what I imagine is a latent time distortion power the candidates were selected as possibly possessing. The guy who gently takes the defeated brother in hand could easily become a soulmate and lover.
Some of the chapters have more “action” than this, others have less. You’re read of the foreshadowing is on target!